You see these two dogs that follow me around, they used to
me my brothers. About ten years ago, after they had fallen into some bad luck
with the wrong crowd up in Chicago, we decided to take a nice long trip on down
to New Orleans. Once we got there, we bought a boat and became fishermen. The
boat was old, but it worked well and even had enough for us all to be somewhat
comfortable.
Our business was good enough and being out on the water all
day made it easier to stay away from anyone who might happen to know our
friends from the windy city.
One day, as we were bringing in our catch to the pier, a
beautiful girl caught my eye. Her clothes were dirty and old, but something
about the way she looked at me made me feel alive. Obviously, being the man
that I am, I went up to her and offered to buy her dinner. She agreed of
course, and we went to dinner and stayed talking in the restaurant until they
kicked us out. I was in love.
The next day, she appeared again, but in nicer clothes and wearing
strange jewelry I had never seen. She told me that she wanted to be my wife and
that she wanted to go with me on my year-long fishing trip. I knew I was in
love and I agreed immediately, however I did not even bother asking my
brothers, they were just going to have to accept our new member of the family.
Over the next couple of months, we travelled from port to
port, selling our catch. As time went on, I grew more in love and my brothers
grew more in their jealousy of my wife and me. During a tropical storm one
night, they came into our room, wrapped us in our sheets, and threw us
overboard to drown.
I thought for sure we would die, but my wife muttered some
strange words, and suddenly we were back on the pier in New Orleans. I was
dumbstruck and asked what had happened. My wife was furious and said that she
was going to use all the voodoo she knew to find and kill my brothers.
Obviously, her being a voodoo queen had never crossed my mind, but at that
moment I got over that shock and begged for my brother’s lives. I told her that
she needed to punish them but not to take their lives.
In the end, she cast a spell that turned them into two
useless, fat, black dogs that could never leave this small town. After ten
years, they would be returned to their human forms but would still not be able
to leave town. The ten years is almost up and soon my brothers will be able to
take care of themselves. I will be reunited with my wife in New Orleans and never
be bothered again by their stupid decisions. Now, isn’t that just the craziest story
if you ever did hear one?
Author's Note: This story is actually still pretty much the same as the Arabian Nights version except I set it in the US. I figured that it would work the same in modern times if I used a voodoo queen instead of a fairy and got the brothers to have more troubles with the law rather than poor business decisions. Also, I decided to keep the first person storytelling since this belongs in a story within a story.
Bibliography: The Arabian Nights' Entertainments by H.J. Ford. 1898. http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/04/arabian-nights-two-black-dogs.html
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I really enjoyed your retelling of this story, JD! I like that you changed up the setting and made it more relatable to us. The voodoo queen rather than the fairy was also a nice twist. When I think of fairies, I do not typically think of characters who are out to seek revenge, so that was an effective character change. I was considering reading the Arabian Nights section. Would you recommend it?
ReplyDeleteI liked the spin that you put on this particular story! I haven't read this one so reading your author's note was extremely helpful! Similar to what Shelbi stated, I enjoyed how you made the story more relatable to the audience by changing the setting! In addition, your writing is direct and to the point which makes it easy to read and understand the point you are trying to make! If the other stories are like this one, I think I would enjoy reading this unit!
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