Cupid and Psyche Retold
In
the not-so-close future, there was a beautiful girl named Psyche, who grew up
in a small town in Montanada. The girl’s father was very smart and owned much
of the land in the federation of Montanada. When his daughter turned 18, he was
selected to become the high chancellor of their great society. With this, the
family moved from a small farm to the large, bustling capital, Wilton.
Suddenly, there were pictures of the high chancellor’s family everywhere, and
everyone became obsessed with the beautiful Psyche. Paparazzi followed her
everywhere, everyone photo shopped pictures of themselves with her to prove
that they were her friend, but no one ever actually tried to be her friend or
even stop and talk to her. She became more scared and depressed as time went
on.
Psyche’s
two older sisters had gotten married before their father had come into his
fame, and they soon became jealous of their younger, prettier sister’s fame. Her
popularity had grown so large that it was brought to the attention of the
overlords. Venus, the most beautiful of the overlords, was in charge of all
legal marriages, and she had grown tired of hearing of this mere mortal who
surpassed Venus’s beauty. She told her son (and employee as head matchmaker),
Cupid, to make sure that no marriage ever be issued to this girl so that her
beauty will be for not and the public would get over their obsession soon
enough.
To complete his
job, Cupid came down from Station 1 (where the overlords lived and controlled
the earthly federations) and sought out Psyche for some reconnaissance. At the
first sight of Psyche, Cupid’s heart skipped a beat… literally. Fortunately for
Cupid, Psyche saw him as he collapsed and ran to his side. “Are you alright?”
she asked. She stared into the stranger’s eyes and he felt familiar, like
someone she had known a long time ago and had promised to someday meet again. “Uhh…
uh,” Cupid mumbled as he stared at his newfound love. “I’m gonna go with no,”
she said as she got on her phone and called the hospital. “Great,” she thought,
“the only way someone will talk to me is if they need medical attention, and
even then all I get is a useless ‘uh.’”
Later, Cupid tried
to devise how he could see his love again. He was forbidden from even speaking
a word to an earthling and if he got caught he would have his mother to deal
with. But, despite the dangers, he came up with a plan. A week after their
meeting, Psyche received a letter from the overlords saying that she had been
given a match since she had become of age. Psyche was excited at first, but
soon rumors had spread that the overlords were trying to banish her because she
was distracting from the earthlings’ daily work. Her parents increasingly
worried and cried over how they may not see their daughter anymore, but her
sisters secretly rejoiced that their sister would be out of the spotlight. The
letter contained no details about to whom she would be married, but it did
contain strict instructions to show up at the sky elevator the next morning.
The departure of
the lovely Psyche was covered by every allowed news source on earth. The
optimistic reporters shared stories that she was betrothed to the head of space
exploration and would spend the rest of her days seeking out other
civilizations in the great unknown. Others reported that she was doomed to marry
the Europa King, a slug-like creature who only appreciated the dirtiest things
in life such as moldy plain yogurt and bad 1980s sitcoms. Soon, the elevator
came down and the whole world watched as Psyche hugged her family, stepped in, and
rose out of sight in the elevator.
In just a couple
of seconds, the door opened and Psyche stepped out. What she saw was a large
meadow full of wildflowers, a dark green forest, and a very large, yellow and blue
mansion. She walked inside, and sitting on a small table was a note. The note
said:
My
Dearest Love,
We
have met before and I knew from the moment I laid eyes on you that you were the
one I wanted to spend eternity with. However, due to dire circumstances, which
I cannot explain, I can never speak out loud to you and you must never know my
name. I know this will be difficult, but just know that I love you and it must
be this way.
Forever
Yours
The
note had no name and no handwriting, but it was enough to calm her nerves.
Several
weeks passed by, and not only could she not talk to her husband, but she never
saw him in the light. In the morning, he would be gone and a letter would be in
his place. Her sisters, with murderous jealousy, would send her emails daily
warning her that her husband was a fraud and that she needed to escape using
any means necessary. Two months after her arrival, Psyche snuck her sisters
onto the elevator and granted them access to her oasis in the sky. The sisters,
growing even more jealous, did everything they could to convince her to escape
this mysterious husband. They handed her a knife and told her to stab him in
his sleep and then run away in the night. Psyche, confused by her sisters,
planned to follow their advice.
That night
Psyche did not sleep at all. When she was certain that her husband was in deep
slumber, she grabbed the knife and held it over his chest. But before she
plunged it forward, she decided to look upon her husband’s face. She turned on
the bedside lamp, and saw the stranger who had fainted at the sight of her.
Reminded of their encounter, she threw the knife to the floor as her heart
filled with love for him and hate towards her sisters and her own foolishness…
Author's Note
I decided to tell the story of Cupid in Psyche where the gods were aliens that governed over earth. I felt like that was the only way to have them in the future. Also, I only did the first half of the story before anything horrible happens because I honestly did not think that their version of a happy ending made up for all of the bad stuff in the middle. Also, I had to stop because I could not fit that long of a story into 1000 words.
Bibliography
Kline, Tony. Apuleius's Golden Ass. 2013. Cupid and Psyche. Story URL
I absolutely loved your creativity in this story. Setting it in the future and making the gods aliens were great ways to make the story more your own. I enjoyed where you ended it. It made for a happier story. However, if you mentioned that she couldn't see his face, I feel like there should have been some sort of a punishment. I will definitely be reading your blog throughout the semester though! You did a great job this week!
ReplyDeleteI loved the sky elevator! That was such a cool idea. I also really enjoyed the part about the slug-like Europa King who only liked moldy plain yogurt and '80s sitcoms. That made me laugh. I'm not very familiar with the story of Cupid and Psyche, but I found it interesting that her sisters were jealous of her beauty even though they were already married. Like, what did they want Psyche to do about that? Anyway, great job retelling this in the future!
ReplyDeleteI liked the story more because you left it open ended and it allowed the reader to form an ending with their imagination. I was not familiar with the story, but I thought it was an interesting adaptation with aliens as opposed to gods. It was a well written story and will has me wanting to read the original as well.
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